A little late to the party, but still wanted to give some feedback. Really enjoyed your composition. From my first listen it’s definitely clear that you have great control on phrasing and balance between all the instruments. My biggest critique for you would be to venture out a bit from some of themes to add some varied texture. For instance, in the fanfare at the beginning, you have a trombone feature (I assume) around 24 seconds in. That would be a great area to slightly stem out of the major key that’s been established to add some more interest to that part. It could be something like shifting melody down off from the 1st to maybe the 4th or the 5th. (and rewriting it to not sound out of key of course). Besides that, fantastic work. I’m very much a fan of orchestral composition as well as writing it (though my works are nothing too special). Keep it up