I agree with all of the kudos you’ve gotten on your own parts added to this, and I’m sure many would like the entire vibe this projects, but I also agree with Iluvstrats about the vocalist. On a tune like this, that’s what’s going to make or break a tune for a listener, and much of that will always be subjective. I’m sure many would like how she presented this, but I found it hard to get through it all happily.