yes i vaguely remember the original you did and thinking i liked it ,i also like this version, pedal steel sounds great lovely sound and the guitar sounds nicely laid back and sounds good on the low notes especialy ill have to try a bit of that . Im not having a pop at your vocals just cause you did on my recording, honest,lol. but you did sound a bit like you werent really bothered or unsure about your voice and it sounds a bit masked by the pedal steel in the mid to lower frequencies, i wonder if the key was a bit low for your voice with this version ,maybe alter the melody up a third or something in places. apart from that it does sound great but all your stuff sounds really good anyway.